You have provided a somewhat proficient understanding and analysis of your ancillary texts, explaining what decisions were made and why to an extent, but not elaborating on where ideas were taken from, or how you came to a final decision.
You need to: 1) Explain clearly what type of research was carried out for each - refer to specific examples of ideas that were taken from the research and incorporated into your own work 2) Explain how all three products work together to brand the artist 3) Elaborate on why you think your final products are successful in appealing to your target audience 4) include images to support points made
proficient analysis of your ancillaries as you have explained research carried out for both as well as ideas taken on board, included images to support points made and explained how all three products work together to promote the artist
You have provided a somewhat proficient understanding and analysis of your ancillary texts, explaining what decisions were made and why to an extent, but not elaborating on where ideas were taken from, or how you came to a final decision.
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1) Explain clearly what type of research was carried out for each - refer to specific examples of ideas that were taken from the research and incorporated into your own work
2) Explain how all three products work together to brand the artist
3) Elaborate on why you think your final products are successful in appealing to your target audience
4) include images to support points made
proficient analysis of your ancillaries as you have explained research carried out for both as well as ideas taken on board, included images to support points made and explained how all three products work together to promote the artist
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